I have slightly altered the magazine advert. All I have done is slightly altered some of the font to make it fit together a little better. I have also moved the text at the bottom of the advert down as I felt the large open space ended up pulling the focus away from the image. These are a few simple changes but have had a great effect on the final outcome of the advert. I think that with the focus on the image, the theme of stage fright is emphasised.
By Joshua Drake
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